Inspiredravens

Thank you for the read and the like :) I'm glad I could encourage you!

This is one of the best poems I have read in my entire life! Holy crap!!! Keep up the AMAZING work!!!

Oh my gosh- I love this!!!

Thanks for the review! I will apply some of your nitpicks (thanks for catching those), and I agree with the "holding it strongly, softly" line being put together and the ...

This is awesome! My only comment is that you have a few missed plurals and stuff like the very end I am so thankful Common Core invented learning target, they ...

Thanks so much!

Thanks for the review! I understand the confusion in contradicting myself, I sort of glanced over it twice before posting because of the time crunch in class and I just ...

Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Happy Writing!

Thanks so much! Happy Reviewing!

Thanks for the review! I will definitely see if I can add setting in there. My original fear was that it would sound too plasticky and fake, but I'm sure ...

Thanks for the review! I will look into adding everything that you pointed out. I am glad that you enjoyed it and I would love to see what you could ...

Thanks for the review! By lectures, I meant what usually happens when you do something bad and someone gives you a very long speech about what you did and how ...

*heaven, not seven XD

Thanks for the review! I will fix the nitpicks and stuff (thanks for pointing those out). I couldn't figure out how to phrase the seven sentence, but I will fix ...

Hey there! This is barely a review, so I made it a comment so your work can get noticed and have a better review than this... Anyways, I absolutely loved ...