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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Father Mine

    Thank you very much for your review :D This was part of my creative writing exam and the capitalization was required. I usually don't like to do it, but we ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: My Tears Are Held

    Thank you very much for your kind words! I see what you are saying about both of those lines, the one with my heart I will change just a little ...

    May 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: God is Calling

    Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Happy Writing!

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: God is Calling

    Thank you very much!

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Leaving

    Sounds like a song almost... I like it!

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: God is Calling

    Thank you so much for your kind words :D Truly the Holy Spirit wrote this through me, I was in the middle of my homework and he just said "go ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: God is Calling

    Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and that it spoke to you! Happy Writing!

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: God is Calling

    I understand what you are saying about the fourth one, it tripped me up a little and I had to think about it harder than the others. It's a learning ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: God is Calling

    Thank you so much for your kind words. This was written by the Holy Spirit through me- He has been calling me to write for Him and has given me ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken Houses

    Litterally this speaks to me so much. Well done.

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Phoenix Inferno 1

    I'm rather brain dead this month on writing things out, my advice (I know this sounds selfish) but read my first chapter of my book and maybe that will help. ...

    Apr 18, 2015
  • Other » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: 25 Things to Remember When You Become a Book Character

    awesome!

    Apr 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Mirrors and Smoke

    This sounds like it would make an AMAZING song! Dang good job! Keep up the awesome work and Happy Writing!

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: The Escapists, Ch.1

    My pleasure :D I can't wait to see what you create next. Let me know if you ever need to me to review something else too. I'm glad I could ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: The Escapists, Ch.1

    I will review this tonight I promise! I've been away for a while. Do you want a shredding or just an overall feelings thing?

    Mar 27, 2015


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