Inspiredravens

Thanks very much! I will take it into account! Happy Writing!

Absolutely beautiful! I feel like Sam Hunt or someone could sing/rap this and it would be incredible- my mind was feeling the rhythm- excellent job!

Thank you for formulating this so well. I feel that just clicking the star at the top of the page isn't enough. Thank you for voicing all of our problems ...

Thank you very much for your awesome review! I agree with everything you pointed out :D As for the two you's I will change it to one or the other ...

Thank you for your comment :) I agree with everything you say. I like to mix just enough structure (rhyme and beat) with natural rambling thoughts, so I feel you ...

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback. My only issue is that I don't like planning out anything. I usually let it flow out and then make it sound as best as ...

Thank you for another review! The first and only thing I disagree with here is my "should" statement. This is only because there are Gods to be described later and ...

Wow okay, totally failed at my job as a writer in cleanliness in this chapter. Dang I needed that. Thank you for nitpicking! I will not be so foolish as ...

Thank you very much for your review(s)! I assure you that I will take everything into account as soon as I begin editing my novel (been saving that for nanowrimo ...

Thank you very much for your review! I think, in regards to the nitpicks I have many excuses lol: 1.) I have been using my mac for writing lately and ...

Thank you very much :) I'm looking forward to you reading my other works then ;D

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Thank you very much for your review, I understand everything you say. Thanks for pointing it out. I will take it all into consideration in the next things I write ...

Awesome! Thanks so much for your review! I will take your comments into account :D

My pleasure :)