Inspiredravens

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* I've come to review! So to start off- beautiful syntax and word choice and usage and all that wonderful stuff- awesomeness! It gave your poem an ...

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* Its Ravens here for a review! To start off, well done :D You made the feeling of the poem circulate perfectly around the child inside the ...

Hey there! *Trumpets sounding* I have come to review! So, since it is poetry, there isn't a ton to edit or talk about, but nonetheless I have found stuff to ...

Hello there! *trumpets sound* I’m here to review! So, to start off, this sounds a bit cliche in your first sentences since a LOT of characters wake up to an ...

Hello there! I’m here for a long awaited, rather rudely withheld review for you (I am sorry for the long wait, I’ve been away for a while and then life ...

Hey there *trumpets sounding* I have come to review! So, for starters, what I first began to notice with this piece were the phonic/grammar mix-ups, so I will put plenty ...

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* I have come to review! So, since this is a poem, I guess I can just jump right into things, so here we go! It was ...

Hey there *trumpets sounding* I have come to review! So since it is a poem, there isn't much to quote, but I would like to make a few comments instead: ...

Hey there! So this is only half of a review because I was unsure of the rating thing and how well I would like the story. I will not quote ...

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* I've come to review! So since this is a poem, there isn't much I can quote, but I will jump right in to things. with bright ...

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* I have come to review! This is a wonderful poem and I only have one quote to point out (lucky you hahaha!) And swell their stomachs ...

Hey there! *trumpet sounding* I've come to review! Since this is a poem, I will get right into things... you was there as Nitpick: grammar, this needs to be "you ...

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* I have come to review! So I guess since this is a poem, I will just start: My first words of advice is that you need ...

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* I've come to review! So I guess I will just jump right into it since its a short poem *Yay!* I would like to start out ...

Hey there *trumpets sounding* I’ve come to review! So to start off, I will throw my nitpicks in whenever I find them (since i review as I go) but at ...