Insomnia

Hey, Nutty. Nice piece you have here. Good that you're experimenting with your narrative style. =O I just found a few tihnfs here and there. Flyn wasn't in the best ...

Hey, Dreamer. Just had a quick read through, and althoguh there wasn't that much to it, i am interested in what you've manged to create. There will be more, won't ...

Hey, Lucy. :) At least we finally got some more of this, even if it wasn't that much. You had good grammar and spelling the whole time through, so there ...

I'd have to agree with Snoink. Unless you're one of those people that reads the crits before the story, then that'd be alright. ;) But I don't think we have ...

This was pretty good in spite of its length 9and probably because of it). A story like this may get a bit tired if you add in pages and pages ...

Actually, I'm a bit happy that there isn't a cliffhanger. My heart might have given out or something. ;) I'd have to agree with Ada, : the dialogue exchange got ...

I didn't find anything wrong in this one. :) You could re-do your paragraphs to make it easier to read, but that's all up to you. I want to get ...

Finally! xD I haven't seen POD around for like, two weeks. xD I think I read all of Ice Cubes since you last posted it. -_- I just got a ...

That's not very nice. Not only did Chris not come in for the whole Chapter, Becca did instead lol! That's just horrible. xD I had just be thrown hastily be ...

Hey Meevs. I think I'll push on to the end of what you have on here now. :D This Chapter seemed familiar to my, and then I remembered that this ...

Hey. And maybe once again I spoke too soon. You get disappointment and a good surprise in the space of one Chapter! =O I only found one thing this time, ...

Okay, maybe Jamiy isn't going to get hurt... yet lol. This chapter was good, first time in a while that he actually looked like he could be happy. “You actually ...

Hey Meevs. It's not just past midnight no, so what I say might be a bit more coherent. ;) but one day when she had a ridiculous craving for mars ...

“I liked you’re other room better *your I wont ever go in its room anyway.” *won't “No. No its not. After that first nio could just be a comma, but ...

Wow, seriously? I thought that was just me. Well, it's actually Social Studies, but that's close enough, isn't it? Now I'm going to stop before I go into a rant ...