Innergy

"A rainfall forms puddles of emotion within your iris, whatever you may feel, your emerald eyes can't contain it, may it be released, drop by drop until the pure rivers ...

Your good looks encouraged me to grow up, I was an immature girl, beauty parlors were never my thing but I went to them just to look beautiful for you. ...

A sweet sound, A sour touch A tasty feeling, this is the life I choose to live. A pleasureable pain, A painful orgasm, A careful mistake, this is the life ...

Ok, so I decided to edit this piece, because I feel that you guys deserve a makeover of this particular poem and what i'm really trying to convey. Feel free to share your thoughts and feelings on this.

I've never been a master at prose but here's an attempt