IngridClayre

I forgot to add that you are a GREAT writer! :) I love your writing style- and I'm quite picky with what writing styles I like!!!

Woops! Somehow it posted twice... :P

Very good, Veer. I really liked this. Hahaha... It sounds like one our chats with you, Crazy and I over at the WriterFeed Pad!! This poem made me laugh. :D

It's a great poem (better than I could have done) but I found some awkwardness in the last three lines. Everything else seems to flow nicely. I like it's simplicity ...

Thanks for the review! It was awesome and you gave me some GREAT advice! Thanks again!! ~Ingrid

Thanks for the review Zephion!

Very cool! I can't wait until you post the rest of the story! I'll read it all! :D ~Ingrid

This is perfect. It is beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. You are an amazing poet, keep writing! I want to see more of your poetry... it is so ...

I really love this! It is SO funny! I was laughing so hard while reading this!

Thank you for the review!

Thanks for reviewing it! This is a little snippet of the prologue in a book I had an idea for. I will definitely keep working on it- after, of course, ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! I will definitely think about what you said in my new fairytale rewrites (I'm planning out a Snow White and Red Riding Hood too).