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Thank you! :)

Thank you so much for your kind words! :D

This wasn't meant to be a review, sorry. It's just habit to click the review button.

I like it! :D

Yes, I completely understand that short poems are often a stylistic choice, which is why I don't dwell too much on length but rather content. I've written quite a few ...

I really, really love this! I'd leave a review, but I really don't have anything to say. It's such a beautiful poem, and sweet too! :D

Thank you so much for your review and your kind words! :D

Thank you for the review and the positive feedback! :D

Thank you for the review! :) I realize that I seem to be repetitive with some phrases. I tried to keep Holden's voice, but it's a little hard to do ...

Ah ok. Stupid word limits XD Also, The Catcher in the Rye is one of my favorite books as well! *high fives*

Thank you for your feedback! I left out some things in the birth scene because I didn't want to spend too much time on it and make it drag. But, ...

Thank you for your feedback! A note about the logistical errors of the birth scene: I don't know much about pregnancy and I was trying to move the story along. ...

I have decided to go the prequel route for this next one. Please let me know what you think!

Thank you for the review. I will make sure I fix those mistakes. Happy review day! :3

Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it :3