Incandescence

Kit - Indeed, the original title had been "flirting after cumming"... Regards, Brad

Oh dear God, my spleen died...

All - Thanks for your thoughts and considerations. Jig: "random madness"? I guess if you consider religion "madness" (or, perhaps more interestingly, religion "random") then yeah, I agree about that. ...

Rieda -- I'm still debating on posting more of this. Poor Imp - An unsolicited crit? Well, it must have been my lucky day. To address your question: the heavy ...

xalabasteralienx, This is a good haiku. Personally, though, I think haikus tend to be worthless, in the end, and would suggest you use this image and incorporate it into a ...

Beautiful Angelic Goth-- I apologize for my elementary speech. Let me clear this up: writing about completely obvious things is boring to your audience. Combining politics with poetry has always ...

Hi, shmegan bob's back - You might start by asking yourself, "What makes this character interesting in a way that might also be interesting to my readers?" Best, Brad

A typo, I'm afraid. =]

Ofour-- Just addressing the first question, I would say: doctors are (in the US) the highest paid individuals hands down. Just in Houston (my currrent city of residence), the average ...

Colleen-- The Problem: you are reading too much into the poem. What I am saying is not beneath the words--it's already on them. The tricks the poem mentions all have ...

Colleen, I had in mind the more appropriate connotation of "chionophobia" (which literally means "fear of snow") with "fear of rigidity"--indeed, this is an alternative definition many sources present

Sorry, UberJimmy - This is a pathetic little reminiscence that goes no where. All the best, Brad

Trident - If Danielle dies, Jonathon, as her son's treating physician, by law becomes the temporary guardian of her child. This is her significance. Best, Brad

bonafide-- re: "I know exactly what I am trying to communicate. It's lost in translation, which is to no other's fault but my own." Not knowing what to communicate and ...

Clau, re: "Does any one have any suggestions as to HOW I can go about doing this?" First, you should have one. Second, write. Write and write and write. Best, ...