Incandescence

Hi awsomewritter123, The above is sufficient to trigger the gag reflex. This is really awful writing. Return to grade school and learn grammar and how to spell. As it were, ...

Peacefulgirl27-- Try writing poetry when not in a state of REM sleep. Really. It does nothing for you or your language. Junk this. Best, Brad

Cameron-- I am glad you find this topic of interest and justify its pointlessness by your own curiosity; that does not mean everyone else is interested in it. If you ...

ANI, While I am glad you enjoyed it, if you can't tell me why--then, that isn't very useful, is it? Part of being a good critiquer is knowing what you ...

Remember, Poetry is more than a collection of questions and linebreaks. Figure out what imagery, metaphor and simile are before posting again. Thanks, Brad

Bjorn, This belongs in your blog, not on the poetry forum. You have produced and are capable of producing much better. Best, Brad

Sharty-- I fail to see the humor in this. You are eating an omelet at what? This is funny in the way a dog getting mangled by a car is ...

ConorR-- This is a tour of amateur thoughts presented in jarring, meaningless form. Outside of my relief to reach the end, I found nothing of interest here. What is it ...

jtksmile-- How touching. Did you feel like this would persuade me to your optimism? In that regard, you have failed miserably. Poetry is an art as much as an ar(gumen)t--don't ...

Peacefulgirl27-- You let out some flarf; I gasp, then barf. Trash this. Welcome to the YWS Poetry forums. Best, Brad

ConorR, Your ramblings will find a better home at a different website. I suggest Best, Brad

Ahoy BirthdayPirate, Stick to pillaging ships until you can coherently piece together your thoughts. Best, Brad

worgs-- Good lord. This suffers from uncurable gangrene. Self-loathing does nothing for you. Best of luck (you'll need it), Brad

BrokenWings-- Dump the abstracts. Cut a wrist and let us watch it bleed. As you actually feel life losing you, you might gain a poem. Now that might be interesting. ...

xanthan_gum, Thanks for returning. Your questions conjure to me the power of language to equivocate meaning--perhaps, for the first and second sets, it is all three? The obvious direct image ...