In_the_Moonlight

Are you ready? I'm so pumped to write this review! Okay so here we go- “I’m home!” Jared shouted out , slamming the apartment door closed behind him, and flinging ...

I loved this, and definitely think you should continue it. It reminds be of the Mortal Instruments series, which I recommend. Anyway here we go: Don’t antagonize me Sebastian,” she ...

This was good, but I felt like I missed something. Did she tell him about Will? I have to be honest and say this wasn't my favorite chapter, but maybe ...

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was absolutely amazing. KJ, you have to just have to write more and soon. Ya left me with a cliff hanger and as much as you rock at ...

Welcome to YWS, Midnight, :D I loved the beginning of this piece, mainly because it seemed more medieval to me then most stories on here. Okay into my review....... Her ...

Hi Lucyy, I like Nina, she seems tougher, more fierce, then all the other vampire characters in different stories. But there isn't much of a plot here. I know it's ...

I haven't looked at this forum in awhile. Oh, and before when I said that it reminded me of Terrier I only meant her outfit. That's all. I've already told ...

Okay, maybe I was just a tad slow when reading this. we all have those days. Thank you Scarecrow. Anyway Dark Angel, I liked these chapters. Very nice detail. Except ...

This was good, but I think you shouldn't stray to far away from the main theme. They were going to perform at the festival. I think it was nice that ...

I didn't read the chapter, but the preface isn't really a preface. It's more of just an intro, but it doesn't really sound like a prologue either. Moreover I would ...

Very nice! The poem was excellent although I thought some of your lines were a little to long. The length of them sometimes took away from the rhythm. For example ...

This was a good poem but a bit cliche. It just sounds wierd when a 13 year old talks about this forbidden love. Anyhoo it doesn't really matter what I ...

This was a good chapter, however, you had me from the first paragraph than very quickly lost me. It was a slow chapter, although the last sentence was wonderful. It ...

I loved this chapter. It was well worth the wait! But Sera’s bright violet, casting their hypnotizing color across the stone walls, eyes gave her distress away. This sentence sounds ...

Hey KJ, Okay so here it goes. I liked how the chapter started off; right in the middle of the mystery surrounding her parents. You have a way with words ...