InTheTrees

Thanks for your review! I was sort of going for a free verse Kathy Acker-esque piece, but I agree, it's quite all over the place. I'll try to explain and ...

Oh no, sorry to worry you! Whenever I come across references to "scorned women" in poetry or life in general I take a second to go "hmmmm" and decide whether ...

This is one of the best poems I've read on this site to be honest. You are extremely talented, and I dearly hope you pursue publishing. Sorry that I couldn't ...

That makes sense, and it's a very beautiful aspect of snow that you're trying to capture, but it's important to communicate your meaning to the reader. Good luck! You have ...

Hi! Hopefully this isn't overtly rude, but basically it only sounds dirty because guns are a classically phallic symbol. I found your poem quite sweet, but that was also popping ...

Thank you for your helpful critique, SubtleSanity! Ill certainly review one of your works :)

I'm glad you liked it! Have a lovely day!

Thanks! Hah, that would probably be a pretty odd cake ^.^

Thank you so much Pompadour! Also, I really love your name! As for the pretty word thing, it's something I've sort of struggled with. I have trouble writing about specific ...

Glad I could help! Have a lovely weekend :3

I freakin love this. It's about as unconventional as you can get, and yet it still works. Please write more of this style!!

Thanks Sophiewrites!

Hi fortis! Thanks for the compliments and stuff! As for the content, I was attempting to write a poem about domestic abuse. In domestic abuse situations, the victim sometimes feels ...

Thanks Kanome! I'm really glad my imagery worked for you ^.^ Have a super lovely night