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Imahappywriter

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: .

    Hi there! This piece is AMAZING, I quickly read over your other ones and I'm genuinely impressed. For me, it feels like I'm in the comfort of another dimension, with ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: A sad swan's song

    Hi! I really like this. This is a very relatable piece, I especially love; I wish I was a princess And not a poet. However the grammar is making me ...

    Sep 1
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: It was my birthday

    Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this. It was simple, a bit numb and it showed quite realistic emotions toward repeated disappointments. I like the italics and the bold, it ...

    Aug 31
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: Skylar Adkins: Love in decaying hearts

    Hi! This piece is really great, I was a bit confused about the genre though, it felt it could’ve been fairytale, poetry, or something else. I absolutely love the themes ...

    Aug 30
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Trippin’

    This is one of my first proper reviews so it might not be as amazing as some others, but I hope it helps! Ok.. my original thoughts straight after reading ...

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Politics Re: Inactivity- my call of duty

    This is great, good job. I've never really been one for poetry but this drew me in very quickly so commendations (I think thats the right word). I love the ...

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My doctrine

    First of all, you have an INCREDIBLE vocabulary. I love the mystery of it, I think it is impressive because it has a real, and raw aspect while maintaining fantasy ...

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Over That Hill

    This is a great metaphorical piece, I appreciate it's realistic value and it kind if reminds me of the song lyrics so far away but still so near the lights ...

    Aug 30
  • Other » General, General Re: Tar

    I'm new at this too, let me just say, that is a great descriptive piece, reading it I can feel the passion and the emotion this has, I can feel ...

    Aug 30


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