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Re: .
Hi there! This piece is AMAZING, I quickly read over your other ones and I'm genuinely impressed. For me, it feels like I'm in the comfort of another dimension, with ...
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Re: A sad swan's song
Hi! I really like this. This is a very relatable piece, I especially love; I wish I was a princess And not a poet. However the grammar is making me ...
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Re: It was my birthday
Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this. It was simple, a bit numb and it showed quite realistic emotions toward repeated disappointments. I like the italics and the bold, it ...
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Re: Skylar Adkins: Love in decaying hearts
Hi! This piece is really great, I was a bit confused about the genre though, it felt it could’ve been fairytale, poetry, or something else. I absolutely love the themes ...
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Re: Trippin’
This is one of my first proper reviews so it might not be as amazing as some others, but I hope it helps! Ok.. my original thoughts straight after reading ...
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Re: Inactivity- my call of duty
This is great, good job. I've never really been one for poetry but this drew me in very quickly so commendations (I think thats the right word). I love the ...
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Re: My doctrine
First of all, you have an INCREDIBLE vocabulary. I love the mystery of it, I think it is impressive because it has a real, and raw aspect while maintaining fantasy ...
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Re: Over That Hill
This is a great metaphorical piece, I appreciate it's realistic value and it kind if reminds me of the song lyrics so far away but still so near the lights ...
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Re: Tar
I'm new at this too, let me just say, that is a great descriptive piece, reading it I can feel the passion and the emotion this has, I can feel ...
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