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Re: Gift
Hey Curiosity! It's Imaginator17 here! Now, this could be a really great poem, but I think there's some minor details missing that we can fix. "Talent without disciplined" "Disciplined", should ...
Jul 22, 2015 -
Re: Curses (Prologue)
Hey roeckercody, Imaginator17 signing in here, and I must say, that I loved the atmosphere you introduced with your writing. Before I get into any criticism, (which I'm having a ...
Jul 22, 2015 -
Re: Basecode: Chapter One
Hey Storm! Imaginator17 signing in. I got your request, and since it didn't exactly specific what chapter, I'll review this chapter first, and then the next later on. Now to ...
Jul 22, 2015 -
Re: Editing an Author's story
Hey shaon! Imaginator17 signing in, I'll get straight to it and just say that I really enjoyed reading this work. Although, this was a bit heavy (and not because of ...
Jul 21, 2015 -
Re: The stranger
Hey there! Imaginator17 here, and before I start I just realized you signed up to YWS today, so if no one has said it, I'd like to welcome you to ...
Jul 21, 2015 -
Re: radio!cables
Hey Fortis! Imaginator17 signing in! It's been a while since I've worked on poetry, let alone review it. So bear with me haha Well first of all i'd like to ...
Jul 16, 2015 -
Re: Nostalgia - Chapter 1
Hey Lavvie, Imaginator17, signing in. I would just like to start of by saying that I really enjoyed reading this work. Before I delve into any criticism (which isn't much) ...
Jul 16, 2015 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter One
Hey ScarlettFire! It's been a while. Now onto your work. I really liked it. It felt clear cut and got right to the point. And I agree with Filte, that ...
Jul 15, 2015 -
Re: Remember
Hey there! Well, reading through this the first time my first impression was that this is a powerful poem, the choice of words and tone made the content even more ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: The Punishment of Atlas
Hey there Imaginator17 signing in! To start off i just want to say i like the progression in this writing, you have a nice personification going, i especially like the ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Did you see her?
Hey there! Imaginator17 here, nice to meet you :) Focusing on the poem, well, overall i liked it, there were a few things i didn't like but overall i enjoyed ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Without Inspiration
Hello there! Imaginator16 signing in :) I really like this poem it flows well and makes a lot of sense, considering that some that i see don't. One thing i ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The King of The Damned
Hi there! Imaginator16 checking in. First of let me say that i love the poem! And i don't have rarely any bad things to say about it haha, you did ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Sky Haven
Howdy! Imaginator16 here to review, I really like this. Let me explain why: 1. I love how specific and slightly vague the poem is on the description i see that ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either
Hello There. Imaginator16 to review for you for review day. Being honest, i liked the poem it felt as if it soothed in if that makes sense, haha. It's like ...
Jun 30, 2013
