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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Gift

    Hey Curiosity! It's Imaginator17 here! Now, this could be a really great poem, but I think there's some minor details missing that we can fix. "Talent without disciplined" "Disciplined", should ...

    Jul 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Curses (Prologue)

    Hey roeckercody, Imaginator17 signing in here, and I must say, that I loved the atmosphere you introduced with your writing. Before I get into any criticism, (which I'm having a ...

    Jul 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Basecode: Chapter One

    Hey Storm! Imaginator17 signing in. I got your request, and since it didn't exactly specific what chapter, I'll review this chapter first, and then the next later on. Now to ...

    Jul 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Editing an Author's story

    Hey shaon! Imaginator17 signing in, I'll get straight to it and just say that I really enjoyed reading this work. Although, this was a bit heavy (and not because of ...

    Jul 21, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The stranger

    Hey there! Imaginator17 here, and before I start I just realized you signed up to YWS today, so if no one has said it, I'd like to welcome you to ...

    Jul 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: radio!cables

    Hey Fortis! Imaginator17 signing in! It's been a while since I've worked on poetry, let alone review it. So bear with me haha Well first of all i'd like to ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Other Re: Nostalgia - Chapter 1

    Hey Lavvie, Imaginator17, signing in. I would just like to start of by saying that I really enjoyed reading this work. Before I delve into any criticism (which isn't much) ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter One

    Hey ScarlettFire! It's been a while. Now onto your work. I really liked it. It felt clear cut and got right to the point. And I agree with Filte, that ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Remember

    Hey there! Well, reading through this the first time my first impression was that this is a powerful poem, the choice of words and tone made the content even more ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Punishment of Atlas

    Hey there Imaginator17 signing in! To start off i just want to say i like the progression in this writing, you have a nice personification going, i especially like the ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Did you see her?

    Hey there! Imaginator17 here, nice to meet you :) Focusing on the poem, well, overall i liked it, there were a few things i didn't like but overall i enjoyed ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Without Inspiration

    Hello there! Imaginator16 signing in :) I really like this poem it flows well and makes a lot of sense, considering that some that i see don't. One thing i ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The King of The Damned

    Hi there! Imaginator16 checking in. First of let me say that i love the poem! And i don't have rarely any bad things to say about it haha, you did ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Sky Haven

    Howdy! Imaginator16 here to review, I really like this. Let me explain why: 1. I love how specific and slightly vague the poem is on the description i see that ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either

    Hello There. Imaginator16 to review for you for review day. Being honest, i liked the poem it felt as if it soothed in if that makes sense, haha. It's like ...

    Jun 30, 2013


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart