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Re: Float On
I'm still working on this review haha.. I'm starting to 2nd guess all my poetry that lack consistent tense patterns...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: Build Dreams and Smother Me
draft 2 of
Dec 15, 2012 -
Re: Vent
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Dec 15, 2012 -
Re: imposter
This could be my favorite poem on YWS haha
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Float On
Very useful review here but what is an iambic foot and iambs? Thanks, by the way. Do you have any good sources for this stuff? I tried looking it up ...
Oct 7, 2012 -
Re: Book
Hey I really liked this :) Although, this part seemed a bit cliche A book is like a whole new world, Where words fly and embrace the mind,
Sep 30, 2012 -
Re: The Beauty in Sorrow
The rain and the key kinda took this poem away from me. A bit over-used. I love the first stanza though.
Sep 13, 2012 -
Re: .
Really itching to read all of this. :D If I can find the time I will give you some 'views' as a young adult reader. My first impression; very well ...
Sep 8, 2012 -
Re: The Scientist
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Aug 26, 2012 -
Re: A Hero's Day Off
Alright!
Jul 31, 2012 -
Re: I Imagined Death
This is a great short story
Jul 28, 2012 -
Re: Catch 'Em Quick!
Watch you get someone who rages thinking that your an idiot ;p
Jul 28, 2012 -
Re: Vent
This poem is now one page shorter after my last revision; please feel free to comment and/or review it again.
Jul 28, 2012 -
Re: Welcome to Orba Nova Revised Chapter 1-3
Disregard the first error correction, that is obviously not right.
Jul 27, 2012 -
Re: The Fall of YWS: Chapter One
Wow, you have a talent :O
Jul 25, 2012