ImHero

This poem lacks imagery and description, I weirdly liked the line breaks though. The poem is good in general but really could use some concrete content on it. For example, ...

You shouldn't stop no.. my first poem was much worse then this XD

Thanks for catching these!

Its snow..? A comma or semi colon there would make little sense. hero

OK. Thank you, again.

No need to worry, I was just trying to interpret what you where saying. Again, thanks for the review

Consistent stanzas are optional to me. I consider it a literary device to use or not to use like a rhyme scheme. Thanks for the review, hero

Capitalization is based off of sentence structure; a mix between poetry and contemporary grammatically correct writings. I choose to capitalize everything after a period or other ending-sentence punct

The hole in the Ozone Layer and Global Warming are two different things. Thanks for the review, hero.

Its debatable. I just wish you where there when I wrote 6-7 poems starting out and that's all I heard for feedback. Just unlucky I guess. There is truly no ...

what

Your welcome. Rhyme is difficult. Even when you think you get it right someone will think you forced it, :). The sonnet is also very hard, I personally think they ...

cool.

Lovely :) I only suggest to remove the double-space

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