Ignatius5453

This was beautiful, heartfelt and full of palpable emotions, I could feel them jumping off the page at me. I feel your pain, in the past two years my school ...

Just because it is a poem doesn't mean it doesn't have to have punctuation! Ellipses area all fine and dandy, but commas and periods are lovely. Oh and I liked ...

Well, it was all over the place, and I can't decide if that's good or bad. Not a bad effort, not a masterpiece, but I wouldn't count it as a ...

Just because it's a poem, doesn't mean it doesn't need to have punctuation!!!!!! Oh, and the rhythm was a tiny bit... well a little more than a tiny bit off ...

This was beautiful, I know a lot of people that absolutely can't filter their words, and at times I',m included in that group, and this poem completely described those moments, ...

Well, I'm not going to throw out a long response like to one above because they pretty much covered everything. At this moment I'm listening to Mumford and Sons' - ...

Well, I can't really point out anything that hasn't been pointed out yet. But, well... maybe split the lines up into stanzas, it's good like this, but it was a ...

I loved it. I felt the emotion in all of the lines, and well... I dont know what else to say. It was good, but the lines were off-kilt, they ...

It was great, I agree with it 100%. Great job, I totally loved it. A few changes I would make: To write a tale with heart and soul, to find ...

Great poem, but when I was reading it some of the lines were uneven, and it messed the flow up a little, because some had more syllables than others and ...

It was good, just in a few places the lines didn't seem to balance. you're lucky to live When the oceans have died. These two lines here don't really make ...

"A fool says in his heart there is no God." -Psalm 14:3. I was always sketchy on this entire religion thing too. And my parents are HUUUUUGEEEEEE Christians, but what ...

Haha! This was great! So lighthearted and, well... just epic. Good poem, I liked it.... a lot. I absolutely adore summer, but the heat does suck sometimes. The best line ...

I am going to use my favorite phrase, possibly overused by me, but it soooo applies in this case. This poem was legen...... wait for it....... dary!!!!!! I feel the ...

Awhhhhhhh. After reading this I want to punch someone in the face. It was beautiful, I absolutely enjoyed it. Somethign you could fix: You sat next to me durring an ...