Ignatius5453

I liked the style and way you set it up, it was a layout Ive never seen before which made it all the more appealing... BUT, I understood no part ...

You're too innocent, I so often think I don't know why; Must be be the way you blink, you used be twice in a row With you eyes too big ...

I literally just cried. I hate that feeling that its too late, and whenever you feel it, your heart just sinks to your toes and you want to disappear forever. ...

The scheme of the poem was good and it had a general rhythm and rhyme, but it just seemed uneven in places. And the small lines made every syllable that ...

When I read it, it didn't seem so exciting. And A. I can form coherent sentences, B. I am a fervent reader, and C. I appreciate good literature. You should ...

Not a fan, this seems so harsh and offensive to Christians and their beliefs, and just seems like such a melancholy view of the universe. I would hate to live ...

I completely feel you on this one, I was in first grade though and they sent us home. For the next week and a half I slept in my dad's ...

You forgot to add that everybody has the right to live. And forgot to mention the 125,000 abortions performed each day. So add that to this list of wrongs you ...

OK to start out you did well, but when you threw the dialogue in there it threw me off and it didn't sound natural. Then when you got to the ...

well this would be perfect for getting into an alabama or a grambling state or maybe a U Cal, but if you want something Duke-esque or Stanford level you need ...

Good poem. It seemed a bit simple, but yet it had a deep meaning; if you get my drift. Also, your capitalization was abysmal. Every first letter in each line ...

This is so indicative of human nature; isn't that how it always works out. The only way to keep a secret between 3 people, is if two of them are ...

God this was awful, I vomited halfway through.... NOT!!!!! It was epic, and when I say epic I mean legendary, well not really. It was cute, well written, and I ...

The rhythm is off in a few places, especially when you say: "she raged at me," or "she raged at him," the next few words that follow are off rhythm. ...

The fact that I actually sat down and read this thing, this early in the morning, just speaks volumes to your abilities. I feel like I know you right now, ...