Icefire63111

This is great! everything is perfect! Please, please, write something else like it or I'll die. Just do what questions said and you'll be all good. that's all i have ...

kloka, I just noticed this in the corner of my screen! *coughToldyouweregoodatwritngpoetycough* its really good, but there are only a few minor details that need fixing.

This seems very real to me, as a person who used to have an eating disorder. I LOVED it! YAY! GOLD STAR!

Heya Seeka! I'll review in the moring. P.S. - DONT check out my newest blog entry. tis mostly things Ali and I said in a three-hour conversation. Mostly about Bredan's ...

Thank you everyone! And HarelyQuin: I think David would look better with pink and blue hair. Like cotton candy. He can wear my star headband.

Awww....Thank you...

I loved it sooo much...... And i still do.Te-he!

The worst book I've ever read was Little House On the Prairie by Laura Ingalls Wilder I Strongly i DETEST those books. I don't even know why. My friends and ...

Ya! My idea was used! I should get a gold sticker! Anyway, I'll shut up now. I like the ending more, not just because you used my idea! It kinda ...

Great job!!! I was looking through these and found this ironic- my project on Buddhism is due next Monday! No grammer mistakes at all-great job!!!! I hope I do as ...

Taste`a`vision`????? I fell out of my chair laughing when I read that! Your character has a great sense of humor, and the voice you gave him comes through nice and ...

huh. Short and cute.

I really like this poem. The last line was my favorite. And (just guessing) it fits into dramatic poetry because it is so un-dramatic?

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that seriously killed me!!!!!! I`m gonna go crash into a tree now!!! (Psstt!!! that meant she liked it!!)