Published November 12, 2008
Rain is Wet, but Never dry!
It Reflects, off the blue, cloudy, sky!
It Makes it Shiny when it's clear!
Causing a Rainbow to Appear!
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It's decent for a ten-second poem, but the first line seems painfully obvious and there's no need to include exclamation points at the end of every line.
huh. Short and cute.
Wow,
I agree with with denver92,
short, attractive and cute,
The first sentence reminds of what my grandad says when its raining
"Why is rain always wet?",
and I reply with,
"because if rain was dry,there would be no such thing as rain",
[its like our little joke.]
But antway,
welldone!
I agree, short, attractive and cute.
cute