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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: The Lost Island: Chapter 1

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! As you know the beginning chapter of a novel is a very important chapter to a reader. You need a reason for the reader to ...

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 10: The King, The Queen, and...Juno!?

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review yet another amazing chapter of Things Fall Apart! Okay, so lets begin! I was so excited about this chapter and being able to read more ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 10

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! WHAT!? SOMEONE BET ME?! CAN'T BELIEVE IT! Ahem... sorry. On with the review. Corrections! She was a psychic - he had no doubt about that. ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 9

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I can't get enough! Oh my gosh! So excited about this chapter! Corrections! His certainty did not run on merely instinct either. This should be ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 8

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! So, we get to another aspect of Nikki's life here. Not the trying to be raped by a complete stranger, but the barging into a ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God- Part Two (REWRITE)

    Hey! IamTraunt here as requested! So, I have done some researching! Yes, I have done. Which is strange for me, but at least I learnt a lot! Learning is cool ...

    Jun 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 7

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Corrections! I know you're trying to make the scene dramatic, but you don't really need to capitalize the 'it': In fact, she was right at ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 6

    Hey! IamTraunt here! Oh, yeeeeaaah! Can't wait for next chapter! I'm lovin' it ;-) Okay, down to business. Corrections! Not as many nickpicks as you have improved on that SO ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Nine: Adrian Kingston and Frey's Fatal Failure

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review as requested! Wow, so good, lol: 'English is probably the bane of the entire universe.' Seriously!? I read one line and I'm already stunned! You ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 5

    Hey! IamTraunt here to do some reviewing! Yeah! Ahem. Sorry. Yay! We get to see Alexia's power here! Sooo glad :-) Corrections Now I know its some people's style of ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 4

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! So, here we are again. Laughing to ourselves as we compare and relate to Alexia. I know I do, *Grins*. Okay, let’s get down to ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 3

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Chapter Three, here I come! So let's start off with some things you need to correct: Corrections The leader was bald, save a single strip ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Among The Twinkling Stars; 3.1

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! We keep bumping into each other, right? Okay, so I found this a little bit creepy: I leaned back into the auditorium seats, and I ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 2

    Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Sorry if this review is not of the best standard - I'm feel so great. Corrections From above, all the features were hidden behind shock ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Among The Twinkling Stars; 2.3

    Hey! IamTraunt here again! Before I talk about the story, let me point out some things you need to correct. "Ok, we're all friends here," I said musingly, as I ...

    May 29, 2014


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