IamTraunt

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Can I just say... wow. This was incredible. Themes! This was an interesting theme to cover, it had a hint of romance and was very ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! Sunshine retires straight to her room, peels of her boots and doused suit, and lays herself on the bed. Should be 'off'. But though ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review like I promised! There’s no telling what he’ll do to me or my children . I've just told another writer about this, so I'll give ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Sorry its late. Nitpicks! Mama watches us from the back porch, seeing right through me and Peter . This should be 'Peter and me', this ...

*Nods head* Hey! IamTraunt here to... Comment? Yes. So, I can relate to this completely. I've just been interviewed by @Thewriter13 about what we enjoy about writing, and I mentioned ...

:( Aw... Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpick That means no prom, no graduation, no Senior Prank, and I'll be the only person in my grade who, oh, my God, ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! Juno looks up; clearly it’s the first time she’s hearing of this decision that was made without her consent. This doesn't sound quite right. ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! What exists is Ma has been died since I was five months old, and all the love that Pop gives me is the biggest ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpick! I think you accidently put two spaces for a paragraph here: "I tagged along for one trip," he explains, gesturing to himself. "I've never ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! It was “11:00PM,” according to the clock, when I got a message. You don't really need the quotation marks around the '11:00pm', I would ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! She smiled happily, glad her little brother was so honest. This should be a semi-colon. The very idea was so silly, she could cry ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! The buildings colored in graffiti, the streetlights flickering, and the silence. I know this might be right in USA, but 'colored' should have a ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review :) My only Nitpick! Peter snaps his fingers, and the room changes again. You don't need the comma :) Aw. So, so so so so ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! Hospital humor, Peter thought to himself with a frown. English = Humo u r. American = Humor? But Peter knew the brain tumor would ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! This is a lovely piece of work! The title links in with your poem but it totally misled me. I imagined a funny and very ...