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Re: There are exactly four walls separating us
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! This is a great poem. Loved the imagination breathed into it. Nitpicks! I imagine myself drifting free of my body, The comma seems unnecessary here. ...
Jul 26, 2014 -
Re: There She Sat
Can I just say... Hi. Only joking! I wanted to stay... Wow. Your short stories are really, well, short. Aggggghhhhhh! No nitpicks! *Keels over and dies* I'm fine. Honest. Characters ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Raspberries
Hey! IamTraunt here on Her Reviewing Rampage! Nitpick! " Molly, dear, you must not forget about the raspberries, alright? It’s the perfect time to pick them, so get out there ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 2 - Making Purpose
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I haven't read the first chapter so I'm sorry if I'm a little rusty. I will try to help you make corrects and comment on ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 25: Hospital Humor
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Yes. I am having a party for this. First one to review. I'm quite surprised actually. Usually I can't get a word in edge ways ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 11
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Its been a long, long time :) Nitpicks! She staggered like she was about to lose her balance then steadied herself. If you read this ...
Jul 22, 2014 -
Re: Silent.
DOCTOR WHO! IT HAS TO BE! THE SILENCE! Yes! Finally! A poem about Doctor who. Themes! So your themes are obviously alienism. You obviously know your Doctor who well. I ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: Trying Chapter 3.1
Hey! IamTraunt who reviewed this before it was even posted :D Glad to see it is mainly corrected. I feel really special for helping out. Nitpicks! They phoned me and ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: Trying: Chapter Two
Hey! IamTraunt here as promsied. Nitpicks! She sits on a hand crafted quilt, scribbling away in a leather bound journal. This is all one word. It should be 'hand-crafted'. After ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 24: Bruno's Demise
Hey! IamTraunt here to review. Oh no. Oh no no no. Royal! How could you do this to me? Nitpicks! You’ve literally known Romeo for three days and when he ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: deleted #2
Hey! IamTraunt here to review as promised. Nitpicking Time! He showed no emotion; a blank slate. Just a pointer, but I think this sentence would be much more effective if ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Fridge on a Hangover
Hey! IamTraunt here to review this piece for you! [That rhymed xD] Okay, so let me just say... Wow. This was certainly unique! Themes! Okay, so this is not strange ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Lawn Warfare
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I think you deserve an award for this. Beautifully written. Themes! So, I have reviewed Mermaid by TonelessBard and Soon I'll be a Star by ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: The Story Or Summer (Ch. 1): The Young Heroes
Hey! IamTraunt here to review the FIRST chapter of this exciting book. Tsing! Tsing! Question: What does this mean? “Oh, my god! Really? Sunshine, gotta go !” Crystal purses her ...
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Soon I'll Be A Star
Hey! IamTraunt here to review this piece for you! (Hey, that rhymed.) So, I just want to say before I start this review that I loved your concept straight away. ...
Jul 18, 2014
