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  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: spoons

    Here for a quick review! I really loved the tone of the poem. It's executed with an unique pace to it, the idea to use the spoon as a symbolic ...

    Jan 1, 2022
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: That Night

    The beginning itself hooked me up, it was intense making the readers eager to know what was to come next. But slowly the intensity turned to sadness and finally a ...

    Dec 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dreams

    Well crafted piece! Really enjoyed reading it. The entire poem captivating, how you said dream is something of a burden but at the same it gives people the confidence to ...

    Dec 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: Happy New Year!

    Reading this poem, it reminded me of how much of a year was 2020-21, so much happened because of covid-so much lost. It was really THE years. The use of ...

    Dec 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Lost Kitten

    It's a beautifully crafted piece. With the faint discription of the kitten to her journey of trying to survive and then finally ending it with her falling asleep, nicely done! ...

    Dec 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Breaking Concrete With My Teeth

    A beautiful piece with clever use of rhyming words. It wasn't too much-overwhelming-to read. Each verse had its own uniqueness and was a treat to read! I really love this ...

    Dec 26, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: A Reindeer Adventure

    The story you tried saying was fun and magic, the perfect piece to hear before the night of Christmas. With Hershell prancing around, getting more reindeer friends. And the little ...

    Dec 24, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: I dreamt of nothing

    This was a wonderful read. The way you started with a dream of nothing to the meaning of life as you view it. It was deep just like how life ...

    Dec 24, 2021


The fellow who thinks he knows it all is especially annoying to those of us who do.
— Harold Coffin