HostofHorus

Well, TheWalkinDude took the nit pick review away from me... :) So I'll just give some impressions. First, I liked it, there were parts where I was a little confused, ...

Hmmm... Well Howdy! The human Host of Horus here to review! I'd go with the second one, but only because I like the way it finishes up. The first finishes ...

I'll give a quick response. I liked it a lot. And the last two lines.... Wow, powerful and just overall amazing. And they are the only thing I'm going to ...

It made me laugh, even just the title :) I agree with everything the first person had to say. Seeing YWS kinda threw me off for some reason, was debating ...

Mmmm... I liked the rhythm for the most part, you drifted away from the nice you had in the beginning towards the end. And as it has been stated above, ...

Due to the cruel world, I'm removing this. I will respond to the below comment however so I don't look like an idiot myself. I don't recall saying the idea ...

Ello there... Sorry to say but it was hard to keep reading... Not because the poem itself was bad, but because the grammar was not good... I read some of ...

Pleased to be acquainted Kat! Though short poems are kind of hard to go into a lot of detail on I will try by best! (and don't think short poems ...

Hello loudnonsense! OK, just a general impression tonight. I really liked it for the most part. I think it could have been a little longer, but short is good, I ...

Howdy! Just one little edit I saw. w h ere the waves crashed smoothly Otherwise I really liked it, the first four lines or so especially! :) One thing I ...

I'm just gonna give a short general impression. When I saw the title I thought "Sounds like the song I'm listening to right now.... Love the way you lie by ...

Welcome to YWS! Alright, firstly my first impression. I loved how it started, but it moved into, as said above, a piece that seemed rather forced. As if you were ...

Wow, this was one emotional piece of work, I wouldn't be surprised to find you even cried while writing it. I think I just might. It was really a great ...

Okay, I'm not one to shred things apart, I just give my impression. My impression on this fabulous poem is simply that it was very well written and thought out. ...

Haha, nice, I liked it. No corrections really, all I have to say is that it was cute, and rather humorous. You should sing it to your pencil all the ...