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Hello, Overall, I thought this to be a bit short and too unrevealing for my tastes. There should be some mystery but you didn't really describe the main character at ...

Here on request, I shall do my best! Heh-heh. I knew he’d gone before I awoke. I agree with Flower, this line seems off. By preference, I'd change "awoke" to ...

Dear Demoness, Congrats! I really liked this one to bits! Though, it does need a few tweaks. Do you fear death? A little boy was born, learning in life you ...

Personally, I enjoyed it a lot. I don't know if it was the way it was written, or that I was staring at your icon and was picturing Doctor Who ...

Hey Rstegs15, First of all, I have to say that I liked it. It had its sweet and charming moments, which every romantic short story should have. But, I also ...

Salute! Howler, Very nice! I was delighted to see something about duels because, sadly, I'm addicted to them (seeing and reading about them--not actually getting it them [although I do ...

I liked the poem enough, not saying that it wasn't great, but that it could just a bit of work. At first I didn't like the juvenile voice that was ...

Hello... Honestly, I don't know what you were thinking when you wrote this (actually, I do, and I'm not that keen on how it turned out). For one, where's the ...

'Ello there, Starting off, I'd have to agree with the above in one way: the poem is a bit confusing. The point of view doesn't seem quite that defined in ...

Hi, GildedLily (I really like your username, by the way!), First, I'd like to compliment you on you're wonderful word choice and style of writing. I'm really a fan of ...