Horisun

I enjoyed this, it was really good! There wasn't much that I think could be changed or edited, except for this piece of dialogue, "Now repeat what I asked you ...

This was very good, and I really liked it. It was very interesting, there were a few things here and there that I'd like to point out. One, I wish ...

This was great! Not at all what I was expecting, this was really good, I loved the dialogue, I loved the interactions! There was only one thing that I think ...

This was really good, it flowed nicely, and has good word choice. It's deep. (Is that the word I'm looking for?) And I really enjoyed it. However, I feel like ...

This is great! I loved this. This poem IS PERFECT! (Well, that's a slight exaggeration, but it is awesome!) The only thing that I think could be played with is, ...

This is really good! I really like it! I didn't see any grammar issues or misspells, the only thing that I think could be changed it when someone else starts ...

This was very good, and the story was very interesting. I enjoyed it. There were four main things that I think could be improved on. First of all, there were ...

This is a great poem. It was very enjoyable, however, for the first few lines, you had punctuation, but the rest, it was no where to be found. Also, the ...

I loved this! It was really good. I didn't see much of a problem with it other then a few I's that needed to be uppercase, and maybe that Richard ...

First off, I loved this! Its great! I didn't see much that could be improved on. Except maybe when you wrote. "Concrad looked over his shoulder with a sly smile" ...

This is great! I can't wait to read more. There wasn't much I saw that could be improved on, except maybe getting the characters descriptions in a bit earlier, it ...

This was very- sorry, I meant FAIRY good! I'm enjoying this series very- I mean, FAIRY much! It was a little short, but that doesn't matter, as long as you ...

Wow, that ending kind of surprised me! I love how you've written it! The sentences flow very well, and your style of writing is great! the only thing that I ...

This was really good! I really enjoyed it, and you should be proud of yourself! It was pretty short, and I only wish that you had extended the chapter and ...

First of all, this was SO good! I loved it so much! I just wanted to get that out of the way before I get on with the review, because ...