Horisun

Great chapter! It all flowed nicely, and it completely took me by surprise. Which is a good thing! It's keeping me on the edge of my seat, and excited for ...

This was a really nice chapter! It felt very short and sweet, and I liked that! This Raven character has me suspicious. What will she do? Who will she be? ...

This is a really great story! The spelling and grammar was great, and overall, the story had a nice flow. The character feels relatable, and I can't wait to see ...

This is a beautiful poem! It's really good! There is two things that'd I would like to point out, and that's that you forgot a space in two places, "Cunning,Smart" ...

This seems to be super interesting! I really want to see where it goes. The last line had me on the edge of my seat! Your word choice was great, ...

This poem was great! I love how it tells a bit of a story, and shows the feelings of this character. The description was incredible, and idea was awesome! I ...

This poem is wonderful. This poem had a beautiful flow, and I could picture everything wonderfully. However, there is one itty, bitty, tiny nitpick I'd like to point out, and ...

This is a really nice poem! I think it had a really great flow! I especially liked the, "When I'm at stop lights" part, though I do think there should ...

This is a really great poem! I like your word choice, and how you describe all the emotions. There was only one thing that I'd like to point out, and ...

This is amazing! Oh my gosh, this is awesome... So, so, so great! And beautiful, and sad, and heartbreaking, and I'm going on a rant, sorry. Point is, this is ...

Hey, this is the second Cat poem I've read in a row! Really good poem! I love how you describe the Cheetahs eyes as "Flashing Orbs" There isn't much to ...

This is a real good poem! I have a cat, and well he isn't quite as majestic as this poem describes, he is just a great! XD I love how ...

This is a really nice, and heartfelt short story. I really expected a tragedy, nice job playing with my expectations! I went back, and read through it, and I don't ...

I can't believe I didn't read this, I completely missed it! Well, at least I read it now. :D I LOVE this series so much, it's so good! In my ...

I like this poem. I find it to be very relatable. I have a few things I'd like to point out. Firstly, there were a fair few grammar errors. Firstly, ...