Horisun

What's that? A bird? A plane? It's- It's- A review incoming! First of all, I love the flow of this poem, and the metaphors are on point! I like how ...

Hello! I'm Horisun, and welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here! I can relate to this poem! I love the rhyming, and the words flow right off the ...

Good day, or night, or non of the above if you're in a spaceship! I'm here to do a review! (Obviously) Firstly, this is MOST IMPORTANT! You wrote a poem ...

Again, a really great chapter, I love how you're answering our questions without dumping exposition onto us, that's real nice. One thing that I'm still slightly confused about is why ...

This was a really great chapter! Now I understand more, which is great! Everything that was great about the last chapter is great in this one! I can't wait to ...

Hi there! I hope you're having a good day, or night! I love how you set the scene, and honestly, you hit home when you talked about the character fearing ...

Hello! It is I, your friendly neighborhood Horisun, here for a review! This poem is really great! The flow is awesome, the word choice, on point, and the metaphors, amazing! ...

Ello! Horisun here for a review! I really like what you got here, the story is intense, the characters emotions and reactions felt very real, the details painted a vivid ...

"Sometimes to avoid Fathers rage" "We'll sleep here tonight,' my Father advises." This chapter was really nice, and smooth. I think it had a great flow, and the dialogue felt ...

Before I start, I just wanna say I'm super duper sorry I didn't review this when I said I would, I got completely distracted with life outside of YWS, and ...

What's that? A review on the Horisun! Overall, I really liked this story, I loved how short and sweet it was. Something you can just sit down, read, and have ...

What's that? There's a review on the Horisun! This was a really good chapter! It was nice and smooth, and it got lot's of laughs out of me. Also, DRAMA! ...

Hey Liberty! Sorry I didn't get to this chapter very soon, I was very busy this week, and was to worn out to do anything but sleep. XD This was ...

Aww. This is sad, really sad. But also a great chapter! I loved how you described the surroundings and emotions! That was amazing! It kept me on the edge of ...

Yay, new chapter! This one was really good! I loved it! I do wish there was a little more explanation from the Mom, and more focus on the reunion aspect, ...