Horisun

Hello, Liberty! This chapter was a pleasant shift in tone from the last chapter, and an enjoyable read. I the pacing was a little off, though. I felt like the ...

Duh duh DUN.....can. So, Duncan seems like a cool dude. Seems like a chill guy. Though, I think I need to go back and read some earlier chapters, because I ...

I really like this poem. It's thing is something that most people can relate to on some level. I enjoyed the bubbly tone, and you showed how people feel when ...

Ok, this is amazing. I love this, this is absolutely hilarious. She summoned a demon while trying to make soup, that is incredible. This short story(?) is really well written ...

Oh, wow. That ending was just... Wow. That was really well done, and well timed. I really enjoyed how you wrote this. It was a simple idea executed perfectly. Delivering ...

Hello! I hope you're having a wonderful day or night, depending on what time it is. And a belated welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you love it ...

Can I just say that that note is adorable? That's so cute! I love it! Ok, so this story was very well written. The dialogue sounded real, and the description ...

Let the (review) begin! Aww, I like Imogen, she seems nice. That "It's a date." Moment was adorable, though, that was sweet. As always, the spelling and grammar was great, ...

Hello, Liberty! I'm so sorry I didn't get to reviewing this till now. I'm gong to try to review 17&18 in one go, but we'll just have to see. I ...

Hello, OgName! I'm going to call you that, if that's OK with you, ;) Honestly, this poem was SUPER relatable! It's honestly like you know me! I especially related to ...

Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I'm here to drop by a quick review of your work! I loved the mysterious atmosphere, and the visual ...

Hello, EverLight! I'm here to review! Was that a cliché line? Was that a bad joke? Yes, and yes. First off, the spelling and grammar was pretty on point. So, ...

Hello! Let's get right into it! I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors, and the phrasing seemed pretty good, but there's one thing in this chapter that stuck me ...

Wow... Raven good... I never saw that coming, but I'm glad it did. The poor girl, though! To kill a child, even while drunk... Like, that ladies insane! Anyway, to ...

This piece is very thought provoking. I like the idea behind this, and I like how you phrase things. Your grammar seems pretty solid, however, make sure you uppercase the ...