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Re: Foreshock | Chapter 1.1
Good day or night, dusk or dawn! And happy Review Month! I really, really enjoyed this! Genesis is a really interesting character. They're only fifteen, right? And they've been in ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: A Chicken Story
I just had a conversation with my Dad yesterday about how we'd be doomed if chickens managed to organize. And after the death of their Chief? We're in for it ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: Prologue
Hello there, and Happy Review Month! I'm currently reading this when I should be sleeping, so I apologize for any stupid mistakes littered throughout this review. Can I start this ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: The Darkness
Hello there, I hope you are having a grand day or night! I'm mostly going to cover revisions, because @Lezuli did a really good job with the grammar side of ...
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: The Night
Hello there, and Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a wonderful day or night! This story has a very interesting concept. I'm very curious to know what a "Key's" ...
Aug 30, 2020 -
Re: True Meaning of Kindness
Good Evening, and Happy Review Day! This poem has a beautiful message, and I really enjoyed the middle verses, "Circumstances will test us, People will try us, News will Trouble ...
Aug 30, 2020 -
Re: Guardian of the Graveyard
Good Evening, and Happy Review Day! This story had me completely hooked from start to finish, Sentury was a very, very sympathetic character, and the world you built absolutely fascinates ...
Aug 30, 2020 -
Re: The Duskfall Howlers, Zeph Part 1
Woah! That cliffhanger! That was just... Wow... I really liked how this was written! It really is a great way to start a story! The cliffhanger really hooked me, and ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: I Don't Find Peace In The Rain
Hello, and Happy Review Day! Can I just say that I really loved this piece? The word choice brought me to another world, and I felt like I was actually ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: me and whose I talk to
Greetings from mars! And Happy Review Day! I found this poem very interesting. I liked the rhythm to it. I also like the back and forth, (As the name suggests) ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Gal Paladins -2: Strategy Sessions
Hello! I'm back! I'm really enjoying Batty and Revel interactions! I really want to see them talking a bit more, you know, in non mortal danger circumstances, XD Pretty much ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Gal Paladins 2: New Girl
Hello! This is my fourth review to you, and I apologize if I'm spamming your notifications! I'm very curious to see what role Ms. Zhang plays in the story. For ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Gal Paladins -1: Summum Malum
Happy Review Day! For some odd reason, it took several sentences for me to realize this was before everything that had happened in the last chapters XD That has nothing ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Gal Paladins 1: Smells Like School Spirit
Oh! It's what's-her-name, isn't it? Batty? Right? That's it. Happy Review day! I am totally loving this series so far! The 'smell' concept is interesting... Perhaps magic leaked into the ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Gal Paladins 0: Battle Ultimo
Can I just say, I love this! I feel like Lily is how any rational person would react to a real life Glitter Force, or Sailor Moon, or something. (Maybe ...
Apr 26, 2020
