Horisun

Howdy there, and belated welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I hope you're having a good day so far. This was a curious way to kick off a story. I ...

Howdy, and (belated) welcome to the site! I hope you're having a good day so far! As far as first chapters go, you manage to hit all the boxes of ...

Hello, and Happy Review Day! Hope it's been a good one for you thus far. This is an intriguing start. You do a good job leaving plenty of room for ...

Hey Ley! Hope you're having a great day! Gotta say, I've never held a particular disdain for 'moist,' but still, your descriptions of it made me shudder. Particularly "it lingers ...

Top of the morning to you! I hope it's been even half as great as this poem. I'm always partial to poetry that rhymes, and though you don't feature a ...

Howdy, and belated welcome to the site! I hope you're having a great day so far :D I saw this work in the Green Room and went back to read ...

Howdy there, and belated welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I'm a big fan of science fiction, and an even bigger fan of video games, so I was very excited ...

Hello, Inferno, and belated welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I saw your request for a review on this poem, and thought I'd drop by. I love this poem's rhythm. ...

Howdy, and belated welcome to the site! Hope you've had a great day thus far! This was one well executed horror story! The conclusion with the pool of blood was ...

Hello, Leya! I hope you're having a good afternoon! I really like the way that this story kicks off! Rather than starting in the middle of the action, we begin ...

Hello again! Back for another review! This line here got a good laugh out of me: For the very first time in years, the poised, elegant, demonically delicate siren boy ...

Howdy, I hope you're having a good day or night thus far! Diving straight into this, you've gotten real good at describing some disturbing imagery, which works perfectly for the ...

Howdy! I hope you're having a good day or night thus far! Though I lack the context, having never really gotten into Genshin, this short stands well on its own. ...

Hi Abbz! Happy Review Day, and belated welcome to the site! That ending gave me chills. This story's theme of hope in an otherwise hopeless world is told with excellent ...

Howdy, and belated welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I hope you're having a good afternoon. Of the fairy tale retellings I've read, this is by far the most unique. ...