Holysocks

Hey there! I really like the concept of the sky and the earth having a romance... it's sweet. I also really like this last bit: by the Sky's cascading tears. ...

Hey! This was well put together, I think. The rhymes were pretty good; I know normally in poems there's at least one time where there's one of those 'almost' rhymed ...

Hello there! That was a little random, but I enjoyed myself. You have a real free flow about your writing, it kind of entranced me for a bit. I was ...

Hello! I don't understand this poem, but nonetheless I like it. It has a soft, raw feel to it, and I can't explain it better than that. I wanted to ...

Hey! Nice cliff hanger, jeez. Now I have to wait. :( ( it was lovely though ) There's just one thing that I noticed that is a bit bothersome. Sam ...

Hello Noelle! This was pretty good! I like the emotions in this part of the chapter. You have Falyn having a lovely melt down, and Sam being somewhat jealous. You ...

Hey! Alas, I have come... When you first said that the narrator was the greatest Time Traveler, I immediately thought of The Doctor! XD You have to watch; many YWSers ...

O.O Is it Akia? It's Akia, isn't it. Sorry, this is very exciting! Falyn has a long lost sister (if Archie's telling the truth)! I wasn't expecting that at all, ...

Hello! Finally! Someone wrote a Fanfic about something I know! So as you might have guessed, I've never read Fanfic. That's OK, it just means this will be interesting! I ...

Hey Noelle! This 'locket' has been mentioned a fair amount. I'm quite curious to what it is. I have a feeling I probably should know what it is, but I'm ...

I love this chapter! I think it's my favourite yet! This isn't a review; I can't think of anything that needs reviewing. It was clear, and enjoyable, short and sweet, ...

So Sam has competition now. ;) I'm a bit unsure about where Zeke stands. I feel like what he said to Falyn: "I didn't save you for my own selfish ...

Nice ending. There's nothing like some good old-fashioned betrayal. Anyway, I've never reviewed a script before, so this should be fun. This was quite interesting. Of course, it's not really ...

Heya! I'm heeere!!! :3 I really like this story! It is sad, like you said. But it's a good kind of sad. It's one of those stories where you're not ...

Hello! I have come to try my hand at reviewing your poem. :-P This was fairly humorous. Though, I have to admit that from your description, I was expecting it ...