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Hello Noelle! Happy Review Day!!! :-P Akia is seeing her life flash before her eyes. O.O I really, really like how you're showing this very small, scared part of Akia. ...

Hey Noelle! Well this was good. But there's really not much to say, eh? She's got her memories back, which is good. The only thing left to talk about is ...

Hello!!! Well, Noelle, I must say: I LOVE THIS FREAKING CHAPTER. Honestly though! It was humorous in its evil, diabolical way, and full of surprises! “You use me,” Aidan argued, ...

Hey Noelle! I sure find these flashbacks interesting. It's kind of endearing hearing about Sam in his pre-teenish years- and Akia finding him annoying! Gee, Noelle... now I want to ...

Hi Noelle! Alas, I have come!!! That was a much better transfer from reality to dream/flashback this time, I found. Although it was not an uncommon way to go into ...

Hey Noelle! You certainly have a way of pulling the footing out from under us when it comes to your characters history. I think that's actually really good because I ...

THIS IS SO EXCITING. Falyn is out on her own! Oh my gosh! I can hardly wait to go read the next chapter! I'm happy that we've met Phillip, and ...

Hello!!! This was rather suspenseful! I thought for sure Akia was going to be left behind, and then no one would know what to do, they'd all just feel really ...

Hey Stormcrow! I'm starting to like Simon a bit. He seems innocently troublesome, in a way. I liked his little rant that he had... I can't remember what it was ...

Hello! This is probably my most favourite chapter so far! I really like that they link pinkies instead of holding hands... if they had held hands I would be scolding ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS by the way!!! Mind if I give you a review? OK, so this was full of a lot of typical teenage frustration... I like that. ...

Hey Noelle! I like this. The whole 'who has to sacrifice themselves' thing is always a good way to figure out who is on your side, and who is not. ...

Hello there! This was a very thoughtful short story, and in that I mean that it was very thought provoking. My mind is racing, and I am interested to know ...

Hello! That was an interesting ending I suppose. I found it very easy to understand what your character was feeling, there's a lo of emotion in the way you describe ...

Hey! I've come. 8) I actually enjoyed reading this a lot. I like the whole idea, plot, everything! The thing I thought was in a way refreshing was that it ...