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Re: No Romance: Chapter 16
Hey Adri! Forgive me if during this review I seem a bit confused, this is the first I've read of your novel! I'm certainly interested; the ending makes me think ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Fawn (prologue)
Hey there! You requested a review from me... about a week ago I think. Prologues are fun, and I'm curious to see what you're going to do with this! The ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Sixteen
Hey Scar! I've returned! Arjana sighed. He looked towards the bed and scanned his father's face. "So it is true. He's dead." I felt like he didn't seem very surprised ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Fifteen
Hey Sarli! I haven't read your other chapters so I'll be a bit confused, but I'll do my best! First of all, I really like the way your characters interact, ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 8.1
Hey Pomp! C: You'll have to bare with me; I'm far more confused than normal due to hopping in for a review at chapter eight and also because I'm just ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Loss
Hey Matt! How about a review? This certainly is something a LOT of people can relate to; loving someone and losing them. But then you still love them so now ...
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: The Suicide Diary: Chapter 2 Part 1
Hey Gravity! Your chapter has been in the green room far too long, so I thought I'd help it along. I've really been bothered by suicide lately. It's such a ...
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: Tools That Will Make Your Writing Process Easier
Hey there, Judy! First of all I want to say that this is formatted beautifully! Kudos to you; the effort you put into this is not hard to see. You ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: Episode -2: The Adventure Of Seven
Hey there Whatabook! Here's a late welcome to the site! You've got an interesting idea here; a group of kids stumbling upon some magical stones- I wonder what the stones ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: How Alex and Jason met
Hey there! I like the setting of this quite a bit. Maybe because it reminds me of laser tag, air soft, and time splitters(?)- I think that's what it was ...
Jan 13, 2016 -
Re: Rain Short Story
Hey there! This was cute, though I can't help feeling a little jibbed! What happens next? You said this was a short story, so I can't help wondering why you ...
Jan 4, 2016 -
Re: How to Write a Decent Review
Hello there! I hope you don't mind me dropping a review on your reviewing article. ;) I have to say, this was a brave piece to write. I like to ...
Jan 4, 2016 -
Re: A Poem Within A Poem
Hello there! I think this was a very cute idea, and you did way better executing it than I thought you would. I found the hidden poem, and the non-hidden ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Mended
Happy Review Day! I think this has the potential to be quite an interesting story, I'm certainly concerned for this character. However, right now I'm very confused. What is happening? ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Life on the Beach
Hello there! Happy Review Day! I kind of like the like the care-free style of this work. It certainly reminds me of one of those ocean waves simulator; very calm. ...
Dec 30, 2015
