Holysocks

Hey Rosey! I haven't read previous chapters so please bare with me! I also didn't come away with a lot that I wanted to critique, so I might just talk ...

Hey there! Care for a review this lovely review day? So you have a pretty good start here. I like the idea that he's trying to get the stripper out ...

Hey! I thought I'd help this work of yours on it's journey out of the Green Room! C: I haven't read previous parts though, so hopefully this will go alright! ...

Hey there! Let's kick this out of the Green Room for you, shall we? I was so excited that I had a first chapter to review! It's a nice change ...

Alrighty. Took a bit of a break from reviewing- sorry for taking so long to get to your piece! I love abstract pieces, works based on songs/poems, thought provoking stories! ...

'Ello~ So at first I thought you were writing this to make fun of textbooks, and the language that many formal things use, which I thought was brilliant! Very funny ...

Hey, Morri! It's me with another bellow-par "review" for you! Hopefully my thoughts will be somewhat useful. Well I have to say I enjoyed this. Your poetry always runs so ...

Hi~ I'm going to do something different for this review. Let's look at this from another angle. What were you planning to accomplish by writing this work? Right now you ...

Hey there! Shall we kick this work out of the Green Room at last? I know I reviewed one of your chapters for this way back, but I'm not sure ...

Hey there! I thought I'd boot this out of the Green Room for you. I haven't read the three chapters before this so please bare with me. This is an ...

'Ello! I have not read your first chapter- I don't have the time right now, and I thought that perhaps you'd prefer feedback on your second chapter over nothing at ...

Hello! Horror's my jam, so I thought I'd spread it on some toast for you! Ignore me. I always like reading about summer camps. As someone that grew up never ...

Hello there! I thought I'd drop my two cents here. c: I enjoyed the beginning the most, I think. That very first stanza really brought me into it; I wanted ...

Hello! Here with the promised review. I don't know what you were saying not enjoying this! I quite enjoyed this! I heard you refer to this as a bunch of ...

'Ello! How about a review? I absolutely love how you're using second person in this. I've been thinking a long time how to write a novel in second person without ...