HollywoodUndead

"There will be those conversations. After half a decade of breaking your back to learn a new langue, You still don't have the words." This is me in Spanish. Our ...

I love how you wrote this poem like you were talking directly to the reader. It feels like I am walking next to you while you show my your life. ...

This made me smile. :) Well, to be honest this is like my life. I fall for someone and they don't fall for me. I try and try but no ...

I can just imagine every part of this piece. Every detail is perfect. It's like I can see the horses galloping in my head. Very descriptive which really adds to ...

This piece is overall well written, but the ending isn't as strong as it could be. It just kinda is there I guess. Like it says "I think so I ...

The introduction to this story was short and sweet. Giving the readers just enough information to want to know more. I just think that the ending is bit flat. It's ...

This really helps open the eyes of the reader in how this is what goes on in peoples lives. Nothing they do is right. It's all wrong, everything they do ...

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This really helps open the eyes of the reader in how this is what goes on in peoples lives. Nothing they do is right. It's all wrong, everything they do ...

I'm not huge into poetry, but I'm really trying to get into it, so I'm not great at poetry review or anything. I'm just going to be real for a ...