HollyM64

Well this is cool! I love any story that is written first person and this is really well done. The pacing is good and you have a talent for building ...

As a senior myself, wow this felt too real! You have a really nice writing style and the structure of the poem really adds to that. I enjoyed the rhythm ...

Short and simple, but effective! The language and structure gave me some serious Shakespeare vibes, though I would have loved if it were longer. A full exploration of a character ...

Hi! This is a really nice little narrative! The structure is good, as is the writing style, both of which fit the piece very well. It's well written and you ...

For such a short poem, you're able to establish a lot, a which in itself is a skill. You're writing style is very good, your spelling and grammar are great ...

I'm not the biggest poetry fan, but I have to admit this is really good! Your writing style is quite engaging and the poem is, overall, well written. You have ...

Hi! First of all, I applaud your writing, for a non-English speaker, this is very well written. A few grammar mistakes in places (mainly when using "-" and using "are" ...

This was such a fun little story to read! It's almost too relatable and the writing style reminds me of Rick Riordan (which is 100% a compliment!) You're a very ...

You're very good at writing tension and your descriptions are excellent. The structure was clear and concise, your grammar was good and the writing style is both clear and interesting. ...

This was really good! I like the writing style, the structure was good and the descriptions were excellent. The gradual build up and sudden calm were very effective and you ...

Hi there! I gotta say, I really did like this poem. I'm always a fan of consistent rhyme schemes and slightly deeper subject matter so this was right up my ...

Hi there! So I read through both chapters and I have to say, I really like the way you've set the story up. It's both clear in its intentions and ...

I'm always game for interesting poems, so this is right up my street! The rhyme scheme was suitably quirky, the stanza lengths were just right and the poem had a ...

The atmosphere in this is really good, and it's always nice to see someone who has a respect for writing detailed descriptions (it's becoming something of a dying art form.) ...

I figured I read both parts before posting a review and I have to say I am not disappointed! Magic and fantasy hold a place in my heart and I ...