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Hippyhoodrat

Hippyhoodrat

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Our Forever

    Thank you! & his boxers fit just fine LOL!

    Nov 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Our Forever

    And thank you for the review

    Nov 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Our Forever

    It meant like the boxes on a calendar. Each day.

    Nov 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Deaf

    Thanks so much for the review. I completely agreed with your comments and suggestions. I made some changes. Hope you like it :)

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Open Wound

    Thank you :)

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Waltz With me

    Thank you so much, made my day.

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Waltz With me

    Thanks for the review :) I Just made a few changes. I hope it made a difference. Feel free to make any more suggestions.

    Sep 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Loveprints

    Yes. yes the two people are singular pieces. its not so much that they make up an entire puzzle. Its more like they are just two pieces of this puzzle ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Loveprints

    Thank you so much :) :)

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Damn Near Burnt

    Thank you so much

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Scared

    So happy I could help.. and thanks, I'd appreciate that.

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Damn Near Burnt

    Thanks so much :)

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Damn Near Burnt

    Thanks so much for the feedback. I'll see what I can do about condensing those lines....and No. I meant YOUR palms. Im trying to say that when the same person ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Damn Near Burnt

    Thanks so much for the feedback. I didn't change much and I'm probably not done editing but I wanted to implement your idea of keeping it going. What do you ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Open Wound

    Thanks so much for the honesty. Will be working on my formatting.

    Sep 23, 2015


Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown