HildegardHope

I had to put this through a translator so sorry if i got something wrong! It is a great piece on writing and the pressure placed on writers. I can ...

Oh dear i wasn't expecting this. poor kitty. I enjoyed this, although it wasn't very perspicuous. Especially the ending. Its unclear whether or not his father was saved by him ...

Heya Hope here for review day. the concept you are trying to express in this poem done perspicuously. I usually don't review poems because its harder for me to review, ...

Hello! Hope here, this is going to be a bit short since I don't see too many issues, but mostly I just want to point out that all of the ...

Hello, Hope here. This poem is cool and I like poetry based off of music, but I noticed a few issues right off the bat. Firstly **I used to see ...

Hello! The first bit of advice I am going to give you is that when you feel ready to post this somewhere other than YWS, I suggest Royal Road. If ...

Hello, Hope here! Happy review day! I must confess i haven't read the other chapters of how to kill your dragon, but this seems like a decent jumping on point, ...

Hello Hope here, happy review day! Firstly, a little typo! addiction Nextly, I want to mention the use of ----- to separate the stanzas. Now I'm going to assume this ...

Hello Hope here. Happy review day! I like poems, and this one really captured its theme well. It follows a good structure of beginning middle and end with the POV ...

Hi Hope here. I make a lot of big suggestions in this review, feel free to disregard them if you don't like something I said, but please take it into ...

hello! Hope here, little warning- I tend to be a bit more critical and long winded than the average reviewer, but I don't want to discourage anyone or come off ...

Hi me again!!! Alr biggest issue with this is the pacing. I understand that this is supposed to feel fast paced and confusing, but because you already write with a ...

Hi! its me again. I read some of the other parts, and I have to say that my biggest grip with this series is the chapter length. Some of the ...

Hi. This is weird as frick (affectionate-horrified). Lets get right to it. I can't really comment the content matter, other than saying I don't read Mpreg, or shipfics, or... really ...

Hello! Hope here, as I said, i'll be going through your greenroom works for the next little bit. It always sucks when you write fanfic and no one reads it ...