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HikariHateke

  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

    Hey Kari here with a review! This was a good read, it sorta reminded me of the boxcar children in a way. Though I noticed that amy could say 'lion' ...

    Aug 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Daydream

    Hi Kari here with a review! This was so interesting to read it was a story and a poem, it kinda reminded me of the book 'Maggie Maggie' by Beverly ...

    Jul 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Not Posting

    Amazing! I love the message that came from this! I don't plan on posting Every slightly messy piece Sometimes I just write To grant my mind some peace Exactly some ...

    Jul 30, 2021
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: A Story Without Any E's

    This was a really nice read! Usually I only read poems on here but I was not disappointed. and you didn't have any E's in this story! Like what? How ...

    Jul 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Fantasy Re: To The Rising Sun

    On wow this was really good! When the day comes That the sun sets on war And rises on peace What more can be said but To the night! To ...

    Jul 30, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Becoming the Big Bad Wolf

    Oh wow I'm not sure how to review this. Not because it's bad don't worry its really good. I love stories like this where they take a classic and use ...

    Jul 30, 2021
  • Short Story » Narrative, Health Re: “You know you’ll die, right?”

    Oh wow this really made me see things differently. I can see the struggle as you fight with yourself, Your body says one thing but the mind says another I ...

    Jul 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: [Normal People]

    Oh gosh this is amazing! The first part is pretty and weird -but in the good way that leaves a small chill down your round-up i knew I was gonna ...

    Jul 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Night's Cradle

    Oh i loved this! The way you portrayed the night was just so '👌' us know? ' The night she stood in front of me cloaked in her dark shawl. ...

    Jul 28, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We only go as far as we walk

    I'm new to reviewing but Wow this was really good! We only go as far as we walk that's True and everyone goes different ways, some walk far, others are ...

    Jul 28, 2021


Why do we only rest in peace? Why don't we live in peace too?
— Alison Billet