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Woah! Straight to the point. I like it. It's small and as I said straight to the point. um so I really only saw two errors one is a period ...

@Mahvash thanks I won't I really like your reflection

This is very hateful, I really like it though. I like that it is short, sweet and to the point. I am very fond with the second paragraph. In the ...

This is really wierd, yet I find myself wondering some of the same things. Your vocabulary is outstanding, but what does cahoots mean? In your very last line you mention ...

Wow. This is very good. I like it. The question of the whole poem. Does your poem have a certain amount of stanzas? I really like it

Lucy I totally agree with you thank you for your feedback. No she doesnt die it means her last line describing her...emotions towards him leading up to the last part

You're sentences flow beautifully! You have some real talent. I felt very emotional reading this poem. Please do continue writing.

I believe that when writing Shakespeare you should avoid using contractions because it takes away the authentic meaning behind the writing unless he used the word I've before

Wow! You have such a talent! You really brought the emotions to life. It's very beautiful. i can relate to this. So many emotions coming together.