Haylie

I must say, that was AMAZING!! I loved it :') You're an excellant writer, I couldn't find any flaws in that at all x) LOVED IT! Keep of writing, i'll ...

I'm sorry, but this kind of bored me right from the start :/ I'm sure you're a good writer though, for me there was just too much detail.

I liked it :3 The emotions she feels come through really well, I must say. Carry on writing! Much loves xx

Wow! That's frickin' amazin' I couldn't see any flaws at all :') LOVE IT!!

That's such a good way of decribing love :') It's pretty much true. I had one person in my head when i was reading this :') I actually loved it. ...

Wow! That's really good :') I couldn't stop reading it. I like how you write too (: Keep on writing (y)

I really, really liked this :') I like the way you wrote it, and almost everything about it xD Twas awesome, keep it up!

This is more of a lyric poem than a romantic story. However i like it, it's good. Carry on writing!

I actually loved this :') You're a really good writer. Keep it up!

Aaaw thank you :D yeah there always is to be honest.

It seems like there should've been a bit more story to it. In my opinion anyway. I can see this workin' as a big story, you might want to do ...

I like your plot of your story, however you have a few spelling mistakes and you need to remember to capitalize your I's (: