Harley

i figured since it was only two punches, enough said. i might re work that bit, actually. thanks :D i've finishe dit, but i'm gonna wait for a few morepeople ...

yay! i like it, excpet that instead of "would of" it should be "would have".

It's different, which is what the music scene needs right now. I love the last three lines; rock on. Hopefully you can get a microphone or something, tape your band ...

It's "where to switch lanes" - i think it sounds okay overall it's really cool, as your songs always are, but i think you should add more to it. fast. ...

i like this. a lot. short but powerful; very well done. you so need to see if you can get a song out of it- give it a good tune ...

Pee dot, Ess dot, Satan is a mo’ fo’. i love that so much :P

that's really well put; although it's hard, try not to take it personaly.

my god, thanks so much! it's so me, you actuall;y listened to everything i've said to you and turned it in to something amazing in that way that only you ...

:P nice...

totally. almost every song on the radio is about love; it gets annoying! rhymes are hard :P lol i'll work on it. thanks for sommenting, folks :D

:shock: mazin raisin, as usual one question: why's it called hourglass?

~update~ I walked home myself, staring at the ground, hands in my pockets, wondering what I’d done to deserve this. My hopes had dive-bombed, crashed and burned- I felt awful. ...

wow this is one ofthe most amazing poem i've ever read. seriously. all i can say is wow =D>

sureal: in america and canada, people tend to say "math" rather than "maths". this was cool; i liked it and i think you should continue with it.

lol we're working on it- he likes it htough, so we're halfway there. by any chance is the greenday song a cover? 'cuz there's a song called "She" by elvis ...