Harker

Hi there, jaypolarbear! This is a really great piece, and I can't wait to review it... so let's get started! Introduction: Let me first say that the way that you ...

Hi there, Dee! Because this piece is short (but sweet ;)), in this review I'll be suggesting a few small changes and sharing with you 4 things that I loved ...

Hello there, fellow Spark! I honestly can't wait to review this. It's beautiful and brilliant and... well, let's just get started, shall we? Ready? Set? Go! Introduction: So, as I ...

Hey there, FromWithin! (I love your username, by the way.) I should really be reviewing other stuff that I promised to review, but this was just so promising... I couldn't ...

Hi, Lylas! Can't wait to review this one. (Why did it take me so long? O.O) Ready? Set? Go! Introduction: I have to admit... I went into this apprehensively. I've ...

Hi there, Jadefox! Sorry for the short review, but (as you'll see below) you can feel free to PM me with a follow-up. Ready? Set? Go! Introduction: I'd really be ...

Hi, Meshugenah! I had heard that you were a great writer and YWSer, and this poem proves at least the former to be 100% true. I truly was captivated by ...

Hi there, Tiffany! I can't wait to review your poem... let's get right to it, shall we? Ready? Set? Go! Introduction: I have to say, I really love this idea. ...

Hello there, willachilles! IronSpark here, reporting for the Sassy Ladybugs. ;) I can't wait to review your piece, so let's jump right in. Ready? Set? Go! Introduction: This is a ...

Hi, TheSilverFox! I can't wait to review this eloquent piece. Ready? Set? Go! Formatting, Punctuation, and Grammar: Trees vanished within the wall of smoke that ran over them, the fire ...

Hi there, Hermione! (Great name, by the way! :)) Introduction: IronSpark here to review your beautiful piece. This is my 75th review (3rd star) and I wanted it to be ...

Hi, Vibe! I love your username, by the way. Introduction: This is beautiful. You truly have an innate sense of cadence, and I really enjoyed it. Here's just a few ...

Hi, Mini! Guess this is my first chapter in my newest 21-part journey. Let's dive right in... :) Phrasing Suggestions: Underneath a field, in the expansive burrows of Hoof Spots, ...

Hi again, Storm! I can't wait to review this chapter, so let's get started! Odd Grammar Nitpicks: I'm actually not going to give you any nitpicks here. There are a ...

Hi there, Willow! Introduction: Nice job. This poem really has a lot of potential in some areas... and it excels in others. I'm just here to help you see where ...