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Hey there, Becky! IronSpark here for a review on this awesome day. I'll be doing this by stanza, so... Grasping for air Face clinging with soaked hair When she broke ...

Hey there, Eros! IronSpark here with a review for you on Review Day except for I'm not on a review team so not really but okay . This is a ...

Hey there, paula08! IronSpark here - not for review day, but because I'm lazy and didn't finish NaRevMo AND I WILL I PROMISE WELL PROBABLY NOT WELL I DON'T THINK ...

Hey, ticktock! IronSpark here to review your awesome work. To keep this as helpful and concise as possible, I'm going to talk about two things I think you should consider ...

Hey there, ChocolateCello! IronSpark here for a short review. First of all, this is really funny. As a computer nerd myself, I've had many a friend who use internet explorer, ...

Hey there, ticktock! IronSpark here to talk a bit about this awesome poem of yours. It's been a while since I've seen--much less reviewed--an acrostic on here, so this'll be ...

This is so short. I'm sorry--I'm quite sick now, though. :( Hey there, dropout212! In this review, I want to talk about two things. Part One! One Specific Idea: Okay. ...

Hey there, dropout212! Sparkles here to review your awesome poem. Let's see... Formatting and Logistics: So let's start here. Formatting. Now, I get that this may be a stylistic choice--having ...

Hey there, ilovegeeks! Today it's my pleasure to give you a review on this awesome poem. I'll be making this fairly short and sweet, just like your poem. The midnight ...

Hey there, new YWSer! First of all, if this is how you're feeling in real life, know that there are plenty of people (online and off) who love you and ...

Hey there, EscapetoNeverland! In this review, I want to talk about one thing and one thing only: abstractions. Now, different people use this term in different ways, but the way ...

Hey there, Gummy! IronSpark here for a review of your poem. Just a warning: I'll be talking in terms of traditional grammar because there's no reason to use unconventional grammar. ...

Hey there, ticktock123! Welcome to YWS. My review will be focusing on a few short phrases from your poem, but first I want to suggest something drastic: do away with ...

Hey there, ChocolateCello! First of all: this poem wasn't your best work. I just want to put that out here now. I've read a lot of your stuff, and this ...

Hey there, bla! Nice to review your poem on this fine day. This is going to be short, I have to warn you, this is going to be a short ...