Hannah

Oh, a poem about poeming and being angry at all the ways that different poets like different things and tell you that you have to write different and opposing ways ...

Ohhh, nite. I like this premise. I think it's really relevant and true. Old time food didn't care at all about health. They needed to fatten their families up to ...

Okay, so you had a really interesting premise here. The words that stick out to me most are the words onyx, and then that passage where he's looking up at ...

Ummm, so hey! I like the rhythm in this poem. I like the words that you choose, because you do have a tendency to go with clear diction that can ...

Hey, Animal. Haha, I bet this was fun to write and think about. Especially with different reviewers (like me) always recommending against rhyme because it kind of has a tendency ...

Hey again, Karzkin. This poem happened to come up in my search for something to review, so I'm here again! This poem reads really smoothly. I love the electric theme, ...

I really appreciate the time you took to clearly lay out this narrative and spoke so plainly about an emotional subject. It shows maturity that you can pay attention to ...

Haha, this was great. I kept thinking to myself I wouldn't like your rhymes and I'd get tired of them, especially since they started with the most annoying and over-said ...

Absolutely relevant. We all have the moments where we don't really want to move on, where we're happy where we're are and afraid any forward movement will ruin and erase ...

AHHHHHH. I started out on your team and I wanted to end on your team, but I think you maybe dragged this poem on for too long. :C A teacher ...

Oh hey, Hanora. This is really surprisingly good quality. I feel like it's strong and tight from "His coffin lay under the ground" (though the rhythm through under doesn't quite ...

Hey, MindBlown! Haven't seen you around before, but I'm glad to be here reviewing your poem on review day. So. Right from the start I wanted to see more imagery. ...

Haha, I just finished a review on another poem of yours, and here I am again. So, not as much word play here, but still a lot of good to ...

OOH. Fantastic playing. Here are my favorite lines: Childhoods on light waters of aging deep shallows, in dark. On dark waters of deep childhoods, in light shallows aging. And am ...

Oh yeah. I read this before. I remember loving it then, too. The frankness with which each image was presented and explored. Your honesty is just my style, and I ...