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Re: Death Through Boredom
Okay. I love the ending. That is the way a pantoum ending should work, and it's just ridiculously fantastic as I sit here and stare at how it worked out. ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: you cannot fault a bay window for smudging
Audy, I am loving the way that you are kicking the conventional sentence structure out the window and giving us lots of new ways to think through your choice of ...
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Re: Out of Reach
Deanie! I want to say that I think the juxtaposition between the majority of this poem and the ending is really surprising and real real, genuine, raw, whatever lovely adjective ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: lover bo1
I told you I'd be here. I hope other reviews haven't scared you away. This is really, really, really great stuff. I read another piece about nuclear bombs the other ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: a noontime folly
Ooh, I like this. I always like poems and stories that challenge our general perception of things. My absolute favorite part of this poem is your mention of the pointed ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Chasing Neon Stars
Oh nice. I am always so happy when I read rhyming poetry that doesn't throw me into frustration because of forced rhymes that take over the message. For the most ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Water Coloured Body
Hey there, Nargles. Representing team Green Lantern and also the Knights of the Green Room, I'm here to review. What really caught my attention and heart about this poem was ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Glass Girl
Hey there, ERZA. Here representin' Green Lantern on review day! The first thing I notice and like about this poem is the unique tone. Usually, when tones deal with sad ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Falcon
Hey there, Joe. Let's see if I can't give some useful thoughts on some of the poems you've posted up for this Review Day. Representing team Green Lantern~ So, I ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Masquerade
Hey, my lovely megsug! I'm here from Green Lantern to claim your poem that starts with an M for my alphabet title challenge with HighTop. I also represent the Knights ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: the asking
Persy! I want to say first that I LOVE YOU. I love you so much. I love the emotion that runs quietly through this poem, because obviously this is a ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Hate = Love
Hey, Nike. Here for your second very-belated secret santa review! Sorry your regular santa was a deadbeat santa, but at least I am here to fill in, right? :3 You ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: The Pain
Hi, Nike. I love the beginning of this piece. It describes honestly what the speaker's thoughts about his/her situation are. If this is a personal piece written about you and ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Those Left Behind
Hey, Jadefox. I saw your comment in the Poetry club, so I figured I'd stop by. I really like that even though the rhyme scheme is really strong and prominent, ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: Memories- Second draft
I think this story has a really strong premise. It's pretty much eternally interesting for a reader who is not a twin to try to imagine what it would be ...
Aug 15, 2013
