Hannah

Hey there! Not the best of situations, since I haven't read the previous parts, but let's see what this snippet gives me. Each section/chapter of a novel should be filled ...

Hey, Jericho, So today we're trying something a little crazy and reviewing chapter 3 without having read any previous part of the story. Sometimes it happens like that, and hopefully ...

Hey there! So, first of all, I loved the opening of this poem. I loved the first five lines immensely, and thought they spoke of the breadth of a life ...

Pleasure to meet you. my body is subject to murder. I think it makes more sense as "my body is witness to murder". The pinky fingers couldn't simultaneously be your ...

This is so gorgeous. This is absolutely lovely, and I had no moment of doubt, no moment of mistrusting you, or feeling like you were leading me to some made-up ...

Hey, Lightsong! Apologies for jumping into the middle of a story, but hopefully a fresh perspective can give you some things to think about. First of all, I much preferred ...

Babes, I was literally completely with you, questioning nothing, until you said toes too many times in a row: "Blair," I replied, licking my lips, probably looking like a lizard. ...

Charlotte, the base and the soul of this poem is excellent. I had no idea what was coming, and you hinted it at me with the line "I knew what ...

Hey there, emmylou! I'm here with a quick review. First of all, the way this piece is set up is brilliant. I love the lore that comes so quickly by ...

I'm back~ And I'm so glad that you delivered on the grief. Because a main character without that believable grief would have been hard to identify with, as charming as ...

Wow. You know, even though the Prologue gave me a more epic feeling, the time bending got me used to just enough absurdity to read through this chapter without falling ...

Pompadour! I'm heading through to try to review your newest installment of this piece, so I thought I'd drop a review here, first. My favorite part of this prologue is ...

Hahaha, what a ride you took me on. First of all, I wanted to quote some of my very favorite moments of character development -- my favorite moments from this ...

Hey there, Lightsong! I'm stopping through with a few thoughts for you to consider! Firstly, I think you should consider changing "deserted area" to "deserted place" for the sake of ...

Ooh! This was an especially interesting chapter for someone who missed the first nine chapters (though I'm thinking about going back to read them when I have time) -- it's ...